Erasure Poetry Experiment
Over at dVerse Poets Pub the poetic form for experimenting with today is erasure poetry. Here is what Anna Montgomery has to say about it:
Erasure poetry is a form of found poetry created by erasing words from an existing text in prose or verse and framing the result on the page as a poem. The results can be allowed to stand in situ or they can be arranged into lines and/or stanzas.
So here is my attempt at it, based on a poem I recently wrote about my name and how it looks on paper. Just about half of the words have been erased and I am amazed by how much tighter my poem now feels. Maybe that’s the way to go!
I hated my name as a child.
I craved glamour – Esmeralda was my weapon of choice.
Not this unruly.
A name dully mushroomed to earth.
Sinuous paths circled upholstered the cushions
the public face gentled
yet snake-sliver too less savoury worlds.
Is there a letter missing?
no jagged lines to cut flab
just something scattered
fields far from home.